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Sample Multiple-Source
Essay
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Background
The following essay
illustrates the development of a multiple-source literary analysis. The
short essay explores the literary style of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.,
drawing upon brief quoted passages from his works.
The plan of the paper
reflects the traditional "thesis-support" essay with an introduction (in
this case, the first three paragraphs, closing in the thesis statement),
a body, and a conclusion (the last paragraph).
Note the punctuation
of the quotations and their incorporation into the paragraphs and sentences
as either direct separated quotations, direct integrated quotations,
or as indirect quotations (paraphrases). All three of these types
of references to primary sources must be documented by source and page
number.
The Sample Essay
Student Name
English 2006
Date
The Rhetoric
of Pathos in the Writings of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.
"I
have a dream," says Dr. Samuel Proctor, Martin Luther King, Jr. Professor
Emeritus of Rutgers University. "All the little children--you hear everywhere
you go: 'I have a dream.' All the little children repeating that speech.
It's become like the ‘Star Spangled Banner' or the ‘Pledge of Allegiance.'
It's entered our culture." And so it has: "I have a dream" has become one
of the most memorable phrases of the twentieth century. Of all the many
speeches delivered at the Lincoln Memorial on that hot, steamy day of August
28, 1963, no other remarks have had such an impact as those of Dr. Martin
Luther King, Jr. His words reflected then, and continue to do so now, the
deep sense of pathos in the plight of African-Americans throughout the
United States, a socio-economic and political context rooted in injustices
orchestrated by unfair, discriminatory practices that were designed to
intimidate and dominate the nation's African-Americans behind a veneer
of social and political platitudes accepted as givens by others in the
same society. Those easy assumptions Dr. King challenged in his reflections
on the African-American's experience to that time.
What
set apart his remarks from all the others that day, however, were elements
of style--an oratorical style--that Dr. King had honed in speech after
speech for years. He was, in fact, a much practiced orator. A comparison
of almost any set of his remarks reveals the key to the dramatic sense
of pathos that still accent his works for readers today.
The
distinguishing features of Martin Luther King, Jr.'s style which so personalize
his works are his rich allusions, figures of speech, and parallelism. These
three rhetorical elements dominate his writings, and a study of their use
in Dr. King's "Letter from Birmingham City Jail," sometimes titled "Why
We Can't Wait," and "I Have a Dream"--delivered in the same 1963 season
of discontent and nationwide protest--help us better understand the focus
of the Civil Rights agenda of the period.
When
white ministers protested the Southern Christian Leadership Conference's
decision to pursue "non-violent" but "direct action" in Birmingham in April
1963, Dr. King, in his written response, drew widely upon Biblical, theological,
and historical references in the development of his defense. Always believing
that the fundamental justification for "direct action" was to be found
in Christian scripture, Dr. King cites both Old Testament and New Testament
references supporting his claim that "there is nothing new about this kind
of civil disobedience" ("Letter," 294). He notes, "It was seen sublimely
in the refusal of Shadrach, Meshach, and Abednego to obey the laws of Nebuchadnezzar
because a higher moral law was involved. It was practiced superbly by the
early Christians who were willing to face hungry lions and the excruciating
pain of chopping blocks, before submitting to certain unjust laws of the
Roman Empire" (294). In defense of the charges that SCLC protests "precipitate
violence," Dr. King asks, "Isn't this like condemning Jesus because His
unique God-consciousness and never-ceasing devotion to His will precipitated
the evil act of crucifixion?" (295-296)
While
his most memorable address is punctuated with such poignant themes as "We
can never be satisfied," "with this faith," "let freedom ring,' and the
famous "I have a dream," Biblical references punctuate Martin Luther King,
Jr.'s Lincoln Memorial speech later the same year, adapting parallels from
Biblical references to the contexts of African-Americans in the 1960's.
If the plight of the American black has precedent in Old and New Testament
authority, the Lincoln Memorial address clearly establishes hope for African-Americans
in the same source. The "American dream" for which Dr. King still professes
faith is "deeply rooted" in Judeo-Christian scripture. "I have a dream
that one day every valley shall be exalted every hill and mountain shall
be made low, the rough places shall be made plain, and the crooked places
shall be made straight and the glory of the Lord will be revealed and all
flesh shall see it together." The dream is more than a vision for Dr. King,
however, for it is tied inextricably to his faith in the promises of Biblical
scripture and prophesy.
To
his ministerial detractors in Birmingham, Martin Luther King, Jr. positioned
himself firmly within the mainstream of evangelical Christian thought:
as the divinely-inspired word of God exhibits precedent for "direct action"
up to and including, as may need be, even personal sacrifice, so must the
African-American find his or her own destiny in an essentially Biblical
struggle. If that struggle is perceived by some as extremist, then it is
so, according to Dr. King, on the highest of moral ground. "Was not Jesus
an extremist in love--'Love your enemies, bless them that curse you, pray
for them that despitefully use you.' Was not Amous an extremist for justice--'Let
justice roll down like waters and righteousness like a mighty stream.'
Was not Paul an extremist for the gospel of Jesus Christ--I bear in my
body the marks of the Lord Jesus"'("Letter," 297).
"Letter
from Birmingham City Jail" and "I Have a Dream" are two exemplary declarations
of one of the most important social voices in twentieth-century America.
If established tradition prevails, early every spring, young school children
throughout the nation and college students in literature and composition
courses will rediscover the hauntingly familiar refrains like "Let freedom
ring" and "I have a dream today!" Hopefully, from a recitation of these
popular motifs, these young people will come to realize the broader bed
of ideals on which they rest. In his letter to his ministerial colleagues,
Dr. King reminded them of the long tradition of the church's conceptualization
of justice: A just law is a man-made code that squares with the moral law
or the law of God. An unjust law is a code that is out of harmony with
the moral law. To put it in the terms of St. Thomas Aquinas, an unjust
law is a human law that is not rooted in eternal and natural law. Any law
that uplifts human personality is just. Any law that degrades human personality
is unjust (293).
In
the name of eternal and natural law, Dr. King joined in the long train
of reformers, dating in the American and Western tradition to Thoreau's
"Civil Disobedience, to the Continental Congress's "Declaration of Independence,"
and John Locke's apostrophe to democracy, his "Essay on Civil Government."
Dr. King's words still urge us all to sharpen our sensitivity to universal
law that makes each of us "free at last."
Works Cited
King, Martin Luther,
Jr. "I Have a Dream." A Testament of Hope.
San
Francisco: Harper and Row, 1986. 217-220.
King, Martin Luther,
Jr. "Letter from Birmingham City Jail." A Testament
of
Hope. San Francisco: Harper and Row, 1986. 289-302.
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