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Sample Multiple-Source
Essay on a Literary Topic
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Background
The following essay illustrates the development of a multiple-source
literary analysis. The short essay explores the literary style of Dr. Martin
Luther King, Jr., drawing upon brief quoted passages from his works.
The plan of the paper reflects the traditional
"thesis-support" essay with an introduction (in this case, the
first three paragraphs, closing in the thesis statement), a body,
and a conclusion (the last paragraph).
Note the punctuation of the quotations and their
incorporation into the paragraphs and sentences as either direct separated
quotations, direct integrated quotations, or as indirect quotations
(paraphrases). All three of these types of references to primary sources
must be documented by source and page number.
The Sample Essay
Student Name
English 1302:001
Date
The Rhetoric of Pathos in the Writings
of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.
"I
have a dream," says Dr. Samuel Proctor, Martin Luther King, Jr. Professor
Emeritus of Rutgers University. "All the little children--you hear
everywhere you go: 'I have a dream.' All the little children repeating
that speech. It's become like the ‘Star Spangled Banner' or the ‘Pledge
of Allegiance.' It's entered our culture." And so it has: "I
have a dream" has become one of the most memorable phrases of the
twentieth century. Of all the many speeches delivered at the Lincoln Memorial
on that hot, steamy day of August 28, 1963, no other remarks have had such
an impact as those of Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. His words reflected then,
and continue to do so now, the deep sense of pathos in the plight of African-Americans
throughout the United States, a socio-economic and political context rooted
in injustices orchestrated by unfair, discriminatory practices that were
designed to intimidate and dominate the nation's African-Americans behind
a veneer of social and political platitudes accepted as givens by others
in the same society. Those easy assumptions Dr. King challenged in his
reflections on the African-American's experience to that time.
What set
apart his remarks from all the others that day, however, were elements
of style--an oratorical style--that Dr. King had honed in speech after
speech for years. He was, in fact, a much practiced orator. A comparison
of almost any set of his remarks reveals the key to the dramatic sense
of pathos that still accent his works for readers today.
The distinguishing
features of Martin Luther King, Jr.'s style which so personalize his works
are his rich allusions, figures of speech, and parallelism. These three
rhetorical elements dominate his writings, and a study of their use in
Dr. King's "Letter from Birmingham City Jail," sometimes titled
"Why We Can't Wait," and "I Have a Dream"--delivered
in the same 1963 season of discontent and nationwide protest--help us better
understand the focus of the Civil Rights agenda of the period.
When white
ministers protested the Southern Christian Leadership Conference's decision
to pursue "non-violent" but "direct action" in Birmingham
in April 1963, Dr. King, in his written response, drew widely upon Biblical,
theological, and historical references in the development of his defense.
Always believing that the fundamental justification for "direct action"
was to be found in Christian scripture, Dr. King cites both Old Testament
and New Testament references supporting his claim that "there is nothing
new about this kind of civil disobedience" ("Letter," 294).
He notes, "It was seen sublimely in the refusal of Shadrach, Meshach,
and Abednego to obey the laws of Nebuchadnezzar because a higher moral
law was involved. It was practiced superbly by the early Christians who
were willing to face hungry lions and the excruciating pain of chopping
blocks, before submitting to certain unjust laws of the Roman Empire"
(294). In defense of the charges that SCLC protests "precipitate violence,"
Dr. King asks, "Isn't this like condemning Jesus because His unique
God-consciousness and never-ceasing devotion to His will precipitated the
evil act of crucifixion?" (295-296)
While his
most memorable address is punctuated with such poignant themes as "We
can never be satisfied," "with this faith," "let freedom
ring,' and the famous "I have a dream," Biblical references punctuate
Martin Luther King, Jr.'s Lincoln Memorial speech later the same year,
adapting parallels from Biblical references to the contexts of African-Americans
in the 1960's. If the plight of the American black has precedent in Old
and New Testament authority, the Lincoln Memorial address clearly establishes
hope for African-Americans in the same source. The "American dream"
for which Dr. King still professes faith is "deeply rooted" in
Judeo-Christian scripture. "I have a dream that one day every valley
shall be exalted every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places
shall be made plain, and the crooked places shall be made straight and
the glory of the Lord will be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."
The dream is more than a vision for Dr. King, however, for it is tied inextricably
to his faith in the promises of Biblical scripture and prophesy.
To his
ministerial detractors in Birmingham, Martin Luther King, Jr. positioned
himself firmly within the mainstream of evangelical Christian thought:
as the divinely-inspired word of God exhibits precedent for "direct
action" up to and including, as may need be, even personal sacrifice,
so must the African-American find his or her own destiny in an essentially
Biblical struggle. If that struggle is perceived by some as extremist,
then it is so, according to Dr. King, on the highest of moral ground. "Was
not Jesus an extremist in love--'Love your enemies, bless them that curse
you, pray for them that despitefully use you.' Was not Amous an extremist
for justice--'Let justice roll down like waters and righteousness like
a mighty stream.' Was not Paul an extremist for the gospel of Jesus Christ--I
bear in my body the marks of the Lord Jesus"'("Letter,"
297).
"Letter
from Birmingham City Jail" and "I Have a Dream" are two
exemplary declarations of one of the most important social voices in twentieth-century
America. If established tradition prevails, early every spring, young school
children throughout the nation and college students in literature and composition
courses will rediscover the hauntingly familiar refrains like "Let
freedom ring" and "I have a dream today!" Hopefully, from
a recitation of these popular motifs, these young people will come to realize
the broader bed of ideals on which they rest. In his letter to his ministerial
colleagues, Dr. King reminded them of the long tradition of the church's
conceptualization of justice: A just law is a man-made code that squares
with the moral law or the law of God. An unjust law is a code that is out
of harmony with the moral law. To put it in the terms of St. Thomas Aquinas,
an unjust law is a human law that is not rooted in eternal and natural
law. Any law that uplifts human personality is just. Any law that degrades
human personality is unjust (293).
In the
name of eternal and natural law, Dr. King joined in the long train of reformers,
dating in the American and Western tradition to Thoreau's "Civil Disobedience,
to the Continental Congress's "Declaration of Independence,"
and John Locke's apostrophe to democracy, his "Essay on Civil Government."
Dr. King's words still urge us all to sharpen our sensitivity to universal
law that makes each of us "free at last."
Works Cited
King, Martin Luther, Jr. "I Have a Dream."
A Testament of Hope.
San Francisco: Harper and Row, 1986.
217-220.
King, Martin Luther, Jr. "Letter from Birmingham
City Jail." A Testament of Hope.
San Francisco: Harper and Row, 1986.
289-302.
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