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Sample
Essay for Analyzing an Argument within a Text
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In his essay, "Author Affirms
Campus Hypocrisy," in the April 22, 1991, issue of Insight,
Stephen Goode reviews Dinesh D'Souza's Illiberal Education: The
Politics of Race and Sex on Campus. The book, notes Goode, addresses
the negative effects on higher education of "affirmative action plus
all it has given birth to on college campuses: falling standards of student
achievement, the loud, unceasing denunciation of Western civilization,
the special consideration demanded by groups that call themselves oppressed--minorities,
women, and homosexuals." Goode's review is sympathetic to D'Souza's
attack on the "politically correct" movement in American universities,
and he argues on behalf of D'Souza's thesis.
Among his claims, Goode states
that D'Souza is "good at taking apart hypocrisy." As his
premise, Goode cites D'Souza's analysis of the "notorious curriculum
change for freshmen at Stanford, which saw the advent of a new course that
brought in works by women and people of color for students to read for
the sake of multiculturalism." As developed, Goode's claim that "D'Souza
is . . . good at taking apart hypocrisy" is a conclusion for a simple,
deductive, though unsound argument.
As stated, Goode's argument appears
at first to be non-deductive and can be outlined as follows:
1) [D'Souza] deals at length with the notorious curriculum change for
freshmen at Stanford.
2) D'Souza is good at taking apart hypocrisy.
Unstated premises, however, are essential to his support in premise
1 for conclusion 2. These unstated premises may be defined as follows:
3) (Anything notorious is hypocritical.)
4) (To "deal at length with" means to be "good at taking
apart.")
Restructured, the argument can be outlined again.
1) (Anything notorious is hypocritical.)
2) (To "deal at length with" means to be "good at taking
apart.")
3) [D'Souza] deals at length with the notorious curriculum change for
freshmen at Stanford.
4) D'Souza is good at taking apart hypocrisy. 1, 2, 3
Or, in its numerical analysis:
1, 2, 3
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4
As such, the conclusion, "D'Souza is good at taking apart hypocrisy,"
becomes deductive since it is guaranteed by both stated and implied claims.
An examination reveals, additionally,
that, although conclusion 4 is deductive, the argument itself is unsound;
his characterization of the curriculum change at Stanford as "notorious"
is questionable, at least in D'Souza's challenge of one of its texts, I
Rigoberta Menchu. His analysis of the text is superficial and fails
to justify adequately his dismissal of the Guatemalan author as "atypical"
or that selections of texts "for the sake of multiculturalism"
is an insignificant criterion for text adoption. He fails to mention, for
instance, that during the times addressed by the book, Guatemala was a
brutal land in which her father, mother, and younger brother had been tortured
and murdered by the military; that she was in Paris, having fled for her
life from the Guatemala highlands with the support of human rights groups
sympathetic to her cause. If she is "atypical," she may be only
in that she was one of the few fortunate survivors to escape. Goode's rather
flippant--though unsupported--rejection of multicultural studies seems
prejudiced by his concerns for other issues raised in the article; sarcasm
alone won't satisfy the demands of sound reasoning.
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