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Analysis
of the Sample Essay
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(NOTE: Comments below analyze the text
highlighted in red.)
Introduction of the article, source, author, and the reviewer's point
of view, quotation of the main idea as stated in the article, clarification
of the reviewer's position and purpose of the essay:
In his essay, "Author
Affirms Campus Hypocrisy," in the April
22, 1991, issue of Insight, Stephen
Goode reviews Dinesh D'Souza's Illiberal Education: The Politics
of Race and Sex on Campus. The book, notes Goode, addresses
the negative effects on higher education of "affirmative
action plus all it has given birth to on college campuses: falling
standards of student achievement, the loud, unceasing denunciation
of Western civilization, the special consideration
demanded by groups that call themselves oppressed--minorities, women,
and homosexuals." Goode's review is sympathetic
to D'Souza's attack on the "politically correct" movement in
American universities, and he argues on behalf of D'Souza's thesis.
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Identification of the claims: the final conclusion, the premise(s)
using quotations of the critical terms in the article, and a one-sentence
description of the argument (identifying its structural type, semantic
type, and its evaluation):
Among his claims, Goode states
that D'Souza is "good at taking apart hypocrisy."
As his premise, Goode cites D'Souza's analysis of the "notorious
curriculum change for freshmen at Stanford, which saw the advent of a new
course that brought in works by women and people of color for students
to read for the sake of multiculturalism." As developed, Goode's
claim that "D'Souza is . . . good at taking
apart hypocrisy" is a conclusion for a simple, deductive, though unsound
argument.
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Identification of only the stated claims of the argument, identification
of the semantic type of argument:
As stated, Goode's argument appears
at first to be non-deductive and can be outlined
as follows:
1) [D'Souza] deals at length with the notorious
curriculum change for freshmen at Stanford.
2) D'Souza is good at taking apart hypocrisy.
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Identification of the implied premises:
Unstated premises, however, are essential to his support in premise
1 for conclusion 2. These unstated premises may be defined as follows:
3) (Anything notorious is hypocritical.)
4) (To "deal at length with" means to
be "good at taking apart.")
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Restructure of the argument in Standard Form Analysis:
Restructured, the argument can be outlined again.
1) (Anything notorious is hypocritical.)
2) (To "deal at length with" means to
be "good at taking apart.")
3) [D'Souza] deals at length with the notorious
curriculum change for freshmen at Stanford.
4) D'Souza is good at taking apart hypocrisy.
1, 2, 3
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Construction of the Numerical Analysis; reconfirmation of the semantic
type of the argument:
Or, in its numerical analysis:
1, 2, 3
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4
As such, the conclusion, "D'Souza is good
at taking apart hypocrisy," becomes deductive since it is guaranteed
by both stated and implied claims.
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The Evaluation of the argument:
An examination reveals, additionally,
that, although conclusion 4 is deductive, the argument
itself is unsound; his characterization of the curriculum change at Stanford
as "notorious" is questionable, at least in D'Souza's
challenge of one of its texts, I Rigoberta Menchu. His
analysis of the text is superficial and fails
to justify adequately his dismissal of the Guatemalan author as "atypical"
or that selections of texts "for the sake of
multiculturalism" is an insignificant criterion for text adoption.
He fails to mention, for instance, that during the times addressed by the
book, Guatemala was a brutal land in which her father, mother, and younger
brother had been tortured and murdered by the military; that she was in
Paris, having fled for her life from the Guatemala highlands with the support
of human rights groups sympathetic to her cause. If she is "atypical,"
she may be only in that she was one of the few fortunate survivors to escape.
Goode's rather flippant--though unsupported--rejection
of multicultural studies seems prejudiced by his concerns for other issues
raised in the article; sarcasm alone won't satisfy the demands of sound
reasoning.
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