Exercise 1:  The Business of Style
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Instructions
Exercise 1 contains two sets of sentences that you are to edit and revise to correct problems in sentence style and punctuation and reduce wordiness.

Link to Exercise 1a: Punctuation

Link to Exercise 1b: Reducing Low-Impact Content

Submission
Rewrite each of the sentences and submit only your revised versions to your instructor.

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